I have a favorite person in particular.
The person's name is Namhee-Cho.
I met her 8 years ago in my first hospital as a practical nurse(AN).
She also working as a career AN there.
She was pretty, cheerful and skillful.
I has been considered care and taken instruction very very much from her.
Thanks to her, I could settled in there.
So I am as AN and nursing student now.
Now She and I are good friends and I will be together forever.
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*Correction: Student'ssentence Correctedsentence Grammar explanation Better sentence
I have a favorite person in particular. The person's name is Namhee-Cho. I met her 8 years ago in my first hospital as a practical nurse(AN).
These sentences are correct. However, do you mean PN for Practical Nurse?
I have a favorite person. Her name is Namhee-Cho. I met her 8 years ago in a hospital I first worked at as a practical nurse (PN).
She also working as a career AN there.
She was also working as a career PN there.
Add 'was' to indicate the past situation.
She was pretty, cheerful and skillful.
She was pretty, cheerful, and skillful.
Add a comma (,) before 'and' when you're listing more than three things.
I has been considered care and taken instruction very very much from her.
I have been considered carefully and have taken a lot of instructions from her.
"Have been" is used for first- and second-person singular and all plural uses.
Have + Past participle: "have been" and "have taken"
Thanks to her, I could settled in there.
Thanks to her, I could settle in there.
"Could" is the past tense of "can", so use the base form of your next verb, "settle" to avoid double past usage or redundancy.
So I am as AN and nursing student now.
So, I'm a PN and a nursing student now.
You need to be clear. I think you mean PN for the practical nurse.
Now She and I are good friends and I will be together forever.
Now, she and I are good friends and will be together forever.
Add comma (,) after "now". Don't capitalize "she" unless you started your sentence with it.
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