* Student's sentence :
I feel down today Its one of those days when you feel alone and isolated. i don't want to talk with anyone. What is wrong with me?
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* Correction : Student's sentence Corrected sentence Grammar explanation Better sentence
I feel down today Its one of those days when you feel alone and isolated. i don't want to talk with anyone. What is wrong with me?
I feel down today. It's one of those days when I feel alone and isolated. I don't want to talk with anyone. What
is wrong with me?
> Please don't forget your punctuation mark.
> "It's" should be in a contracted form as you mean to write "It is".
> The pronoun "you" should be changed to "I" to refer back to the writer as the subject of the sentence.
> Do note that the first word of the sentence should be capitalized. Be careful of the small but important
details when writing. They matter.
