* Student's sentence :
Success to me is a personal goal. It is how you acomplish what you want to attain. It is about striving to get what you want in life like money, respect, relationship. Success is who I will be based in my own measure.
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* Correction : Student's sentence Corrected sentence Grammar explanation Better sentence
Success to me is a personal goal. It is how you acomplish what you want to attain. It is about striving to get what you want in life like money, respect, relationship. Success is who I will be based in my own measure.