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Dream Destination

| 2020.09.03 22:53
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* Student's sentence : 

I dream of going to Paris. They say it's one of the most romantic place to visit. I look forward to go to Eiffel tower.  I am also excited to eat croissants. Soon, I know I will realize my goal. 


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* Correction :     Student's sentence        Corrected sentence        Grammar explanation       Better sentence    


I dream of going to Paris. They say it's one of the most romantic place to visit. I look forward to go to Eiffel tower.  I am also excited to eat croissants. Soon, I know I will realize my goal. 


   I dream of going to Paris. They say it's one of the most romantic places to visit. I look forward to going to Eiffel     Tower.  I am also excited to eat croissants. Soon, I know I will realize my goal. 

  > "One of the + PLURAL NOUN" is  a standing rule. We can't say "one of the one". 
  >  "Look forward to + noun phrase (verb + ing or gerund serves as a noun)
  >  "Tower" should be capitalized because it is a definite name of a place, thus a proper noun 
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