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What is success?

| 2020.08.27 20:42
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* Student's sentence : 

     Success to me is a personal goal. It is how you acomplish what you want to attain. It is about striving to get what you want in life like money, respect, relationship. Success is who I will be based in my own measure. 


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* Correction :     Student's sentence        Corrected sentence        Grammar explanation       Better sentence    


 Success to me is a personal goal. It is how you acomplish what you want to attain. It is about striving to get what you want in life like money, respect, relationship. Success is who I will be based in my own measure. 


 
      Success to me is a personal goal. It is how you accomplish what you want to attain. It is about striving to get what you want in life such as money, respect, good relationship. Success is who I will be based on my own measure. 

  > Please be mindful of the spelling of the word "accomplish".
  > Like” is used when comparing persons or things and describing the similarities between things or persons 
    while  “such as” is used to give specific examples. 
 > Add the adjective "good" to describe relationship. Relationship can either be good or bad.
 > "Based on" is a fixed expression to use if you mean "basis".
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