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Siblings

| 2020.08.13 18:39
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* Student's sentence :

   I have two siblings, which it is not common in my Country. I have one brother and one sister. Sometime we 
   fight, but many times we are getting along well. I am lucky to have my sblings.



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* Correction :     Student's sentence        Corrected sentence        Grammar explanation       Better sentence    



   I have two siblings, which it is not common in my Country. I have one brother and one sister. Sometime we  

   fight, but many times we are getting along well. I am lucky to have my sblings.


      I have two siblings, which is not common in my country. I have one brother and one sister. Sometimes we 
      fight, but many times we get along well. I am lucky to have my siblings.

  > The pronoun "it" is unnecessary being part of the relative clause of the subject "I have two siblings".
  > "Country" should be in lower case because it is a common noun.
  > Please take note of the difference between sometime (at an indefinite time) and sometimes (not always).   
  > Be consistent with your tense: we fight, we get along.
  > Be mindful of the spelling of the words all the time.
  > "Many times is okay, but using the adverb "oftentimes", which means that it is not only many times but many          times at a short interval, is the better opposite of "sometimes".

     Sometimes we fight, but oftentimes we get along well.

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