I am a product of a one child policy era. True that I live comfortably because I am provided of the things I need, however it is a burden for me to be alone. There is so much pressure from academic achievements, to the future thought of taking care of my parents. Everything seem to be focus on me.
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I am a product of a one child policy era. True that I live comfortably because I am provided of the things I need, however it is a burden for me to be alone. There is so much pressure from academic achievements, to the future thought of taking care of my parents. Everything seem to be focus on me. .