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I am a product of a one child policy era. True that I live comfortably because I am provided of the things I need, however it is a burden for me to be alone. There is so much pressure from academic achievements, to the future thought of taking care of my parents. Everything seem to be focus on me. 


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I am a product of a one child policy era. True that I live comfortably because I am provided of the things I need, however it is a burden for me to be alone. There is so much pressure from academic achievements, to the future thought of taking care of my parents. Everything seem to be focus on me. .  

       I am a product of a one-child policy era. True that I live comfortably because I am provided with the things I
      need, however it is a burden for me to be alone. There is so much pressure from academic achievements, to
      the future thought of taking care of my parents. Everything seems to be focused on me. 


      >  One-child is hyphenated because such compound word is an adjective. 
      >  "Provide with" is a fixed expression. 
      >  "Everything" is a singular noun, thus have to take a singular verb "seems". 
      >  Be + past participle form of the verb


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