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What annoys me most?



Student's sentence : 

 What annoys  me most? It's the people who think they are more better  than others. They try to control other to feed their pride.  They do not care if they hurt others. I wish these kind of people do not exist.


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* Correction :     Student's sentence        Corrected sentence        Grammar explanation       Better sentence    



What annoys  me most? It's the people who think they are more better  than others. They try to control other to feed their pride.  They do not care if they hurt others. I wish these kind of people do not exist.

       
        What annoys  me most? It's the people who think they are better  than others. They try to control others                    
to feed their pride.  They do not care if they hurt others. I wish this kind of people does not exist.

        What annoys  me most? It's the people who think they are better  than others. They try to control those                     who are around them to feed their pride.  They do not care if they hurt others. I wish this kind of
       people did not exist.

  > "More better" is a double comparative. "Better" only is enough.  
  >  Others mean other people. "Other" needs a noun or simply put "others. However, some words seem to be
      repeated. Avoid redundancy. The better version would be: They try to control those around them to feed          their pride.  
 >  "This" is to be used as it refers to a singular noun "kind".  Use the verb "did" for conditional, determined by
     the   word "wish".



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