Many people think pets can be a burden. I use to think of same thing. However, after having my first dog, my perspective change. Powee became my friend the first time I hold her . She is my source of happiness, and she relieves my stress. Having her is one of the best decision I have ever made.
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Many people think pets can be a burden. I use to think of same thing. However, after having my first dog, my perspective change. Powee became my friend the first time I hold her . She is my source of happiness, and she relieves my stress. Having her is one of the best decision I have ever made.
