Many debate if military service should be compulsory or not. Yes, it's difficult to spend long days in the
military camp, yet it is worth all the sacrifices. One will feel proud having serve the country and knowing that
Korea will have an active reserve army to protect it if necessary.
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Many debate if military service should be compulsory or not. Yes, it's difficult to spend long days in the military camp, yet it is worth all the sacrifices. One will feel proud having serve the country and knowing that Korea will have an active reserve army to protect it if necessary.
days in the military camp, yet it is worth all the sacrifices. One will feel proud having served the country,
and knowing that Korea has an active reserve army to protect itself if necessary.
> "Whether" is used when two options are given - be made compulsory or not.
> "Should be made compulsory" is a better term to use.
> (Having + past participle", thus served.
> "Has an active" is used because it means that it already has in the present, not only in the future.
> Protect needs an object so whether you use the reflexive pronoun "itself" or a sample object -e.g its
people.
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