Drinking alcohol is a popular habit in the country. Most men drink and some women do. In fact, Korea is known of its "drinking culture". Should women drink? For healthy and for social reasons, yes I agree, however they should also understand the impact of their drinking to their families and to their wealth when they drink too much. Drinking when done in moderation is okay.
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Drinking alcohol is a popular habit in the country. Most men drink and some women do. In fact, Korea is known of its "drinking culture". Should women drink? For healthy and for social reasons, yes I agree, however they should also understand the impact of their drinking to their families and to their wealth when they drink too much. Drinking when done in moderation is okay.
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