> I would like to tell you about my favorite hobbies.
My favorite hobby one is jogging and my favorite hobby two is playing sports. If I have time I swim and if I have more time, I rest.
After resting I just relax myself on the bed and lie down. I don't want anyone bothering with me and no more questions if I'm relaxing.
I like these because if I have time I can do my hobbies and enjoy and also because that I like sports.
I like sports, but I don't know why I like sports. I just like sports so I like running, jogging, swimming, playing tennis like that.
I would like to talk about my favorite activity. My favorite activity is playing at home. And I also like to go library, borrow book l usually read. My favorite activity is playing piano. If I play piano l feel relax, so I can do my math, my English and English zoom class easier. And if I have spare time l sleep.
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My favorite hobby one is jogging and my favorite hobby two is playing sports.
My favorite hobbies are jogging and playing sports.
Simply write this sentence using the plural form of hobby which is "hobbies" because you have more that one favorite hobby.
If I have time I swim and if I have more time, I rest.
If have spare time, I enjoy swimming. When I have even more time, I like to relax.
spare=extra this sentence is better when you do them separately.
I don't want anyone bothering with me and no more questions if I'm relaxing.
I don't want anyone bothering me or asking me questions when I'm relaxing.
Instead of writing no more questions it's better if you write, " I don't want anyone asking me questions"
I like sports, but I don't know why I like sports. I just like sports so I like running, jogging, swimming, playing tennis like that.
I like sports like running, jogging, swimming, playing and tennis, but I don't know why I like them.
You can write this sentence better by making a complex sentence and putting your ideas in just one single sentence using the conjunction "but" which is used to introduce an added statement, usually something that is different from what you have said before
And I also like to go library, borrow book l usually read.I also like going to the library to borrow books and read them.
Write "to" before the verb borrow.
If I play piano l feel relax.
I feel relaxed when I play the piano
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