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23.10.26 ReadingGate



> Once, there was a miller who wanted to be rich and famous. “My daughter, Eliza, can spin gold from straw!” he lied. King dragged Eliza into his carriage. Eliza knew she couldn’t turn straw into gold, but she fibbed anyway. Later, when Eliza was alone, an imp appeared. “I’ll help, but only if you promise to find me a delicious baby.” “Your father was right!” smiled the king. Eliza and the king got married.


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Once, there was a miller who wanted to be rich and famous.

This sentence is correct.


“My daughter, Eliza, can spin gold from straw!” he lied.

This sentence is correct.


King dragged Eliza into his carriage. 

This sentence is correct.



Eliza knew she couldn’t turn straw into gold, but she fibbed anyway.

This sentence is correct.


Later, when Eliza was alone, an imp appeared.

This sentence is correct.


“I’ll help, but only if you promise to find me a delicious baby.”

This sentence is correct.


“Your father was right!” smiled the king.

This sentence is correct.


Eliza and the king got married.

This sentence is correct.





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