> There was a prophet named Cassandra. She met Apollo and kissed him, but she spat on Apollo's face. Apollo cursed Cassandra that people will never listen to her. Her brother Paris didn’t listen to her. The people of Troy even didn’t listen to her. After the people ignored Cassandra’s prophet the city was destroyed. She even fell in love with the King Agamemnon who didn’t listen and died.

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There was a prophet named Cassandra.

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She met Apollo and kissed him, but she spat on Apollo's face.

This sentence is correct.

Apollo cursed Cassandra that people will never listen to her.

Apollo cursed Cassandra that people would never listen to her.

Her brother Paris didn’t listen to her.

This sentence is correct.

The people of Troy even didn’t listen to her.

This sentence is correct.

After the people ignored Cassandra’s prophet the city was destroyed.

This sentence is correct.

She even fell in love with the King Agamemnon who didn’t listen and died.

She even fell in love with King Agamemnon who didn’t listen and died.