Jesus would teach using stories. The good samaritan is a story about loving your neighbor. Here is the story Jesus told: A man was walking down the road in jerusalem. He was alone on the road when he was surrounded by robbers. The robbers took his money and beat him up. Everyone who saw him didn't care about him, but a Samaritan helped him wake up, and gave some money.
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