Owls are amazing birds. There are about two hundred kinds of owls. Most owls are nocturnal. That means they are awake in the night. Their large eyes help them see in the dark. Their feather color helps them hide in nature. Owls are talented hunters. Most owls live inside trees or in branches. Owls are shy and quiet birds. You may find one sleeping or watching you!

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Owls are amazing birds.

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There are about two hundred kinds of owls.

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Most owls are nocturnal.

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That means they are awake in the night.

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Their large eyes help them see in the dark.

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Their feather color helps them hide in nature.

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Owls are talented hunters.

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Most owls live inside trees or in branches.

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Owls are shy and quiet birds.

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 You may find one sleeping or watching you!

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