Correction: Student's sentence Corrected sentence Grammar explanation Better sentence
What I want to do clearly until middle school There was no nothing like this.
What I wanted to do clearly until middle school was nothing like this.
Please make sure that your sentence is clear. You can start making simple sentences at first.
However, when I was become a high school student, I had to unconditionally choose the job and department because I want should go to university.
However, when I was a high school student, I had to unconditionally choose the job and department because I want to go to university.
You can just choose want or should but these two words have different meanings.
So in my first year of high school, I want to be a nurse(nursing department) or a video-related department. The reason I wanted to become a nurse is because my mother was able to learn a lot about the human body while studying for a job as a nursing assistant, and the reason I chose a departmant related to video was because I liked editing videos at the time.
So in my first year of high school, I want to be a nurse (nursing department) or somewhat in a video-related department. I wanted to become a nurse because my mother was able to learn a lot about the human body while having a job as a nursing assistant, and I chose a department related to video because I liked editing videos at the time.
Please be careful with how you spell some words. (deparmant - department)
When I was in my second year of high school, I couldn't think of anything other than a nurse, so I chose the nursing departmant.
When I was in my second year of high school, I couldn't think of anything other than a nursing course, so I chose the nursing department.
As I write, my T.M.I. has increased, but I am currently majoring in early childhood education, and I think my dream job is stanle, and the jobs I can work hard on are dream jobs.
As I write, my T.M.I. has increased, but I am currently majoring in early childhood education, and I think my dream job is stable, and the jobs I can work hard on my dream job.
Write the whole meaning of TMI.
Check the spelling of stable.
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318 | What I love About Seoul | 김*정 | 2022-11-24 |
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316 | Why do People Exercise | 김*정 | 2022-11-24 |
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314 | Leadership | 김*정 | 2022-11-24 |
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312 | My Dream Job | 김*정 | 2022-11-24 |
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310 | Describe my family | 박*정 | 2022-11-21 |
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304 | Write something about camping | 김*정 | 2022-11-11 |
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302 | Write anything using do, does, did | 김*정 | 2022-11-11 |