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| 2021.12.19 21:20
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I want to know about the bible.
I need to recite a biblical verse.
If I put my efforts into this activity, my knowledge of the bible will be better.
But the two things I am careful of is that I apprehend the verse literally.
Before almost all people were literate, many people could not read the bible, so they did not comprehend the context of the verse.  
Another thing is that some people chill my intention and endeavor.
However, I am really into theology. I will put extra hours into studying the bible.
Don’t give up even if some critic emerges from somewhere. 


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I want to know about the bible.
I need to recite a biblical verse.
If I put my efforts into this activity, my knowledge of the bible will be better.
But the two things I am careful of is that I apprehend the verse literally.

Before almost all people were literate, many people could not read the bible, so they did not comprehend the context of the verse.  
These sentences are correct.


Another thing is that some people chill my intention and endeavor.

Another thing is that some people cheer on my intention and endeavor.


However, I am really into theology. I will put extra hours into studying the bible.
Don’t give up even if some critic emerges from somewhere. 
These sentences are correct.


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