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> I don't have a lot of memories about camping, but I want to make a good memory by planning camping for children who graduate and I go out to play with my family or friends

    I don't have a lot of memories about camping, but I want to make a good memory by planning a camping for children who graduate and I also want to go out to play with my family or friends.

Please make three to five sentences next time when you write a paragraph.