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Dear Khim( Where am i want live and....)



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When you give me a question which make confusion and surprised.

Because I never think about that question.


Now, I very satifised my living place that wide green glass garden and near by river.

But , I have a plan to live in  U.S.A a few years later.

My son live in Boston which located in east america. 

I want live with my son if i cant get a green card but something make me fear.

In order to live in U.S.A ,  I should develop english ability and make earn much money .

Please help me skill up the english ability.

In this point, My dream place is U.S.A because my son live in U.S.A.

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When you give me a question which make confusion and surprised.

Because I never think about that question.h

Sometimes, when you give me a question I was  confused and surprised because I never thought of that.

We need to change the arrangements of words in this sentence because it's incorrect. 

Because I never think about that question.

Now, I very satifised my living place that wide green glass garden and near by river.

Now, I am very satisfied living in a place with wide green glass garden nearby the river.

Add "am" after the pronoun "I" and arrange the order of your adjectives then add nearby before the word, "river."

 In many languages, adjectives denoting attributes usually occur in a specific order. Generally, the adjective order in English is:

1. Quantity or number

2. Quality or opinion

3. Size

4. Age

5. Shape

6. Color

7. Proper adjective (often nationality, other place of origin, or material)

8. Purpose or qualifier


Example: I love that really big old green antique car that always parked at the end of the street. 


But , I have a plan to live in  U.S.A a few years later.

But, I have a plan to live in U.S.A  after a couple of years. 

Instead of saying a few years later we can also say after a couple of years.


My son live in Boston which located in east america. 

My son lives in Boston which is located in east America. 

The verb "live" must be have "s" since the subject is singular.

If the subject is a singular or uncountable noun, then the verb must be singular.



I want live with my son if i cant get a green card but something make me fear.

In order to live in U.S.A ,  I should develop english ability and make earn much money .

I want to live with my son but first I must have a green card but what I fear the most is, in order for me to live in U.S.A, I must develop my English ability and earn more money.

The pronoun, "I" must be always written in capital letter.



Please help me skill up the english ability.

Please help me improve my  English skills.

Instead of saying, skill up we can say level up or improve.


In this point, My dream place is U.S.A because my son live in U.S.A.

At this point, my dream is to live in U.S.A because my son lives there.

You  must say, at this point because you are "at this point in time or at this juncture or at this moment."


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